Olympic Moment in time

WALT: Describe a moment in time in detail.

I line up bang as the race started.

stomp as I run across the track.

I’m so excited.

I hear runners sprinting across the track.

I hear my heart beating in the middle of the race.

I wonder If I could get a quick picture.

I get to the finish.

I'm so so happy.

I grab the gold and cheer.

The end.

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